its way-cool-awesome! (note: i dont no if in other parts of the world if u use way-cool-awesome, but you r supposed 2 say it all together like its all 1 word.) but enough on the specific language of Pennslyvania...

I love this! its great! YAY! will you do a fanfic where Miss -blue-lady-leader-dude comes back? that would be way-cool-awesome!

Cool story - I liked it! :)

Well, I have only gotten through chapter 3 so far, but I must say that I am quite enjoying it. I can't wait until I have time to read the rest. Good job on it!

Vey nicely done! only 1 thing! When Auril called Rhade a kludge. She should have called him an Uber. Easy mistake, i love your work!

Dude, that was cool. I'm trying to write chap. twelve for Don't Deny the Truth but im experiencing a severe case of writers block. its just i cant talk to my musr over here, but im sure that ill find inspiration somewhere. anyway that was really good considering ot ws ur first and stuff like that.

I liked this story.

I really, really liked your story! I love the Beka/Rhaade pairing too. The story flowed well and was easy to read. You kept the characters true to themselves, but did add your own touch so it wasn't just another Andromeda story. I can't wait to read more of your stories! Keep up the good work!

aw! so cute. Good job on your first fic. I know mine sounded a lot more foolish when I first started writing. Keep up the good work.

dude, awesome again, but i do have one little suggestion thing. whe you change scenes you should skip a couple lines or something like that okali dockali. awesome!

Dude(i know i know), awesome! awesome! awesome! but again, no information about this.

heheh. so cute when beka yelled at her, and rhade said the 'l' word. i was like 'ah yeah! you know you do!'. and the end, when rhade asks to talk to her. he almost shy, it's so cute! wouldn't he look adorable blushing?

And it continues! Please keep the chapters coming!'Tis a good story!

hehehe. levers are cool. ! (my thing for when i'm REALLY excited) omg. they kissed! yeah! hehe. oh. what will happen next. aw, that made me happy!

Nice. Make this Trance/Harper and you got a fan for the rest of your Fanfic life. Oh, and It's Flux not Flex.

ONce again, a nice chapter! Keep it up!