That was lovely. I liked Nami's definition of Sanji as communal property... she really does behave towards him as if he was, doesn't she? XD

You know... that whole "he might stab his eye out if he realised he was making you unconfortable" thing... I wouldn't be at all surprised if that's what happened to the eye we never get to see. O_o

Interesting concept. I almost wonder if this could've happened... Though, hopefully that thought never crossed Vivi's mind... The Strawhat pirates are such strange creatures.

Very nice writing.

I love the idea that Sanji is communal property. Share him around, please!

this was so good! i love nakama fics, they're so sweet. i don't really have any constructive critisism (i know, so helpful, right?). i loved nami's line ("debts should be paid." "no, i just love money.")

Ahh, gosh. I've read this before and I'm sure I had the same reaction ("Ah! I love it, I love it, I love it!"), but this time, while I was reading the conclusion, the statement about the crew being all nuts and crazy and beyond anything and /priceless/ just hit me like a ton of bricks and I was so in awe of how you fitted that epiphany in and wow, Nami and how she's so mischievous and witty and profound all at the same time and the characterizations of the crew were perfect even though there wasn't any direct dialogue from them...
So yes, this was another amazing example of the subtleties you weave in these deceptively simple works of your's and I appreciate it very very much. Thank you!

Aww! Very cute! Loved it!

very sweet!

That's actually rather sweet! Loved the concept and yes those guys are priceless crazy idiots. Course ViVi rather pissed me off nearing the end of her arc for being so damn weak but she was the token princess so couldn't be helped. Am slowly working my way through your One Piece fic but I've just entered the fandom so it might take a while. Good stuff!

Awesome story! You are so great at keeping the Straw Hats in character. You write like a pro, keep at it!

Write on!

Masterfully written: light, lovely, subtle. Fabulous read.

wellwell... i don't know why but I think i noticed a small nami x vivi hint x3

but I really love this story ^__^ different from what I read before!

Aw...so very adorable, and quite plausible, too! The description of Sanji as 'communal property' had me giggling. I think Nami's got Sanji - well, all of them, really - pegged.
"No, I just like money. But these guys...They're crazy. Absolutely nuts." XD Excellently put!

I liked this verbal explaination of the boys on the Going Merry. It's touching to see them demonstrate it but hearing Nami explain it is a rare treat as well. Props also on the very plausible way in which this might be brought up, for someone who has seen as much ruthlessness as Vivi Sanji's actions could be interpreted this way.

I like the concept of them being a gift. To everyone that needs them. It's so true and is part of what makes One Piece so lovable, that never-ending goodness. The 'Sanji as communal property' is a little stroke of humorous genius. Very cute.

Nice and hilarious ! XD ^_^

"Communal property"? Hahahahaha! That's so true, he is... unlike Zoro, who belongs to Luffy alone. *smirk*

This is great - it's nice to see some of Nami's thoughts about the guys. She can be so harsh to them sometimes, so I love to see those softer moments from her.

And do I detect a trace of Nami/Vivi? Or would that just be my twisted mind...?