Yeah. Interesting premise.
One little point: Ginny's name isn't 'Virginia'.

You might want to at least glance through the books.

I really like this! is it going to be updated?

see ya!

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I love the last line.

Is this supposed to be a one-shot? Because it's beautiful if so, but if not, when to you plan to update?

Amber

Ohh, I love it! Please continue it, it's a really good begining. Please?? Just for me? *makes big puppy eyes ,that I practically invented*

Wow! I love it! They're all so good, and nice, and I feels so sorry for them already, and...and... Bacicly, IT ROCKS!! ^_^ *waits for update*

It's a shame this was never extended. It's beautiful.

I really love this story so far and I can see that it has great potential in plot development and character development evident in just the first chapter. I really hope you keep writing this story because it looks like it will be a very enjoyable and logical one (a hard find on this site). So please write again soon!!

That is sad! Tears and crying. Very touching *sniff* I love it!

Awesome, update soon:)

i had shivers going up and down my spine when i read that last line. You've given this story such a great feeling of darkness and mystery...the hoplessness mingled with determination is so palpable. The only negative feedback that i do harbour is in regards to Ginny's name as it is not Virginia its either Ginerva or Ginevra...i can't remember which, but JK herself confirmed it. Are you going to add any more to it? I think it works great as a one-shot but would equally love it to turn into a sixth year story.
-linden

That was amazing. It creates a sense of being that makes the story so real.

i luv the beginning of your story!! keep it up!! also, might i just add a little word of advice: don't neglect your other fics because of new ones. i'm really into fugitive prince as well!! BUMP!!

Nice use of prose, though I occassionally got a little lost in your descriptions. However, my main bone of contention? Ginny's name is NOT Virginia. It's GINERVA, according to JKR. Check your facts on the lexicon before you post.

I hope you update this real soon, I have been waiting awhile already and can tell its going to be a good one. Please update soon!!