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| Spirituality 2008-09-18 ch 3,  | abuseOhh, how nice to read something worth wild to get me back in the groove again! This story is really looking like it's going to be amazing, in a refreshing, cliche kind of way. But either way, I'm looking forward to the next update! Keep up the good work! Spirit |
| Faded Lilac 2008-01-17 ch 3, | abuseIsh would much love you to update but I guess that's not my choice it's yours! Gah! ;>__< Hope you find back your interest in this soon again! |
| Denarius 2007-08-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love this. I can't tell you how much I love a plot where, like in cannon, Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is strained, painful, and made a complex entanglement of feelings because of Kikyo. And you've done it so well! I really like the bittersweet tone to the story, while the language and conversations are two-sided and poignant in a darkly humourous sarcasm. I'm so happy to have found an accomplished author with some of my favourite kind of Inuyasha/Kagome. Thank you for posting! |
| TheHuntressandtheHunted 2007-07-04 ch 3, | abuseFinish this. Please - it's a good concept and I would like to see where you take it. |
| Lady Cai 2007-06-28 ch 3, | abuseOH EM GE I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!! gahh! its ** awesome! |
| soubi202 2007-04-03 ch 3, | abuseThat was a nice mental image... Rawr, but you haven't updated in forever, so I'll leave you with the lovely little comment [general comment actually. mostly generic] I love you. Your story rocked but a few read-overs wouldn't be too bad. I loved the story. Thanks for the great read. |
| Lexodus 2007-02-23 ch 3, | abuseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update! it's brilliant! i wanna know what's gonna happen! |
| Inudaughter 2007-01-08 ch 3, | abusedrat. only three chapters? please update! |
| phoenixiafyre 2006-11-05 ch 3, | abuseThis story is incredibly well written and thought out, and I'm absolutely horrified that you've left it sitting for so long. For the love of god, PLEASE UPDATE! I understand your vendetta against fanfiction, but I looked on the two other sites you said that you would post on and this story isn't on either one of them. Honestly, I'm begging you, don't leave this story to gather dust! |
| Jax Lecarud 2006-08-26 ch 3, | abuse"On that note I will leave you with the mental image of Naraku dressed in a pineapple print shirt, shorts, flip-flops and surrounded by pool supplies." OMG! lmao. i am SO gonna make a pic of that. lol. im loving this story. its very well written, a few typos but thats about it. im not a big fan of Sessh/Kagura, but this makes the story all the more interesting. please write more! |
| GintaGirl 2006-06-12 ch 3, | abuseso good love it cant wait till you write more!! |
| GintaGirl 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseoh my god is all i have to say cause i LOVE IT! so far |
| Ravencries 2006-04-27 ch 3, | abuseI already have a headache and you left me with that image. you can be to crule you know. But yes anyways.. please continue. How does Jakotsu fit into this anyways? It was under the Kagome Jakotsu pairing. |
| LOVEinuyasha66 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abusePLS CONTINUE WRITING...I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| ForgottenSmile 2006-01-16 ch 3, | abuseMany apologies to Naraku fanpeople, but... "pool boy"?! It was amusing, and slightly nausea inducing. Well, the fic is interesting, plot seems to have a strong line in it... Keep writing! |