this is cute i wouldn't have tried this idea until i found some way to make it work but you're making it work quite beautifully

if ya still need pre-reader for your fics, i'll help ya...

nice one ya got here by the way... been ating a while for an update... let me know if ya plan on continueing this one.

Ryu_Vision

Despite the many spelling and grammarical errors I liked this story. I'm always a sucker for Ranma+Nabiki and Ranma+Kasumi fics. Please continue.

it is a good story to read and wondering what happens next with nabiki.

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Actually, that's kinda cute...I hope you do finish this fic...too many go incomplete...either by the muses leaving the writer (like my stories) or some other reason...it's kinda a shame that more of the stories on are incomplete than complete.

Keep the chapters coming!

NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTER!

great fic, you going to update soon

update this story or ill hunt you down

First off let me volunteer as a proof reader for you. I know it can be hard to get the help at times.

Second the story is wonderfull and the error that are in it are just technical stuff that you will learn to get past. Hell I have a degree in english and still make many of these mistakes hehe.

Ok let me know if I can help you out any.

it's very good! keep up the good work!more nabiki/ranma pls.

Wow this is really good. I can't wait to read more of it,

Update soon

While Ranma does need a shoulder to cry on, I somehow can't imagine owner of said shoulder falling in love with the sniveling, crying young man, unless she was falling already.

Hey! Thia was an awesome chapter! If you still need one, I'd be happy to help you preread your chapters. It might help them come out faster. Anyway, like I said, if you need a prereader, check out my profile. My e-mail's in there. Ja ne! ^_^

I like the Nabiki/Ranma stories so please finish this