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KawaiiKupcake 2008-07-23 ch 20,	abuse"I Think I Better Leave Right Now" broke my heart. Seriously, it seemed like they were so alone and they just could never just BE together no matter how much they fought for it. I cried a bunch at the end. When Sasuke was begging Naruto to live my heart was so warm but heart so much...You have become one of my favorite others EVER. Genius, Dude, Genius. KawaiiKupcake
mishap 2008-07-09 ch 20,	abuseAw did ya havta kill him off and make me cry. Seriously though this was wonderful...and I utterly detest tragedy. This was one of the best Sasu/Naru fics I have ever read. Well written, good story flow and most important of all...you can SPELL.
garaXxXhinata69 2008-07-06 ch 20,	abuseseriously? You HAD to kill him. Great. Now my mascara's running all over my face.
garaXxXhinata69 2008-07-06 ch 1,	abuseyou got me. i'm hooked.
garfield 2008-06-28 ch 20, anon.	abusebwah...that last bit made me cry..just a bit... now i have to read the alternative ending love always garfield (or 'hsbs') (PS i found you by a link at LJ)
KARYEE 2008-06-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this fanfic! The last chapter made me cry so much ): Hope you'll write more stories like this! :D
wink wink 2008-06-27 ch 11, anon.	abuseI really enjoy your story and think you're doing a wonderful job. Only thing that bothered me, though maybe it's because I haven't read all the way yet or 5 years made a difference. But Naruto says that he can't get cold but then is cold when at the lake in the flashback with Sasuke. I means it's just a minor minor point in comparison to your wonderful plot.
Dragonwolf 2008-06-24 ch 20, anon.	abuseHello. Okay for a start; I like your fic. grin The scene in Kakashi's POV at the engagement-party. When he meet up with Gai who thrusts a sad Lee in his face. That part is just hilarious. The way you do Gai overall is just so damn funny. Like when he's talking to Kakashi and Sakura about the scarf he's knitting. snicker And when he starts to yell at Kakashi for his orange-comment. After all; his and Lee's uh.. leg-warmer-thingies are orange right? And I really like how you write Hinata; both when she's taking Naruto home and when they're going for a date. And Naruto's totally clueless snicker. But the part by the lake with all the flash-backs. Well; I remember the first time I read this story and that it had me so confused that you went back and forth between the flashbacks and what Hinata was thinking and doing(and well; Naruto's un-thinking and not-doing). This time I knew it was coming and could handle it better. It also makes it feel like they've been sitting there for HOURS. And you handled the lemon really well. Better than most authors out there. You built it up so incredibly good; and also suceeded with the 'act' better than most. smile The part when Sasuke truly confess to Naruto and Naruto pushes him away... Well it's quite much angst. small smile They're both so damn stupid. And all three of them (three - as in Sakura also) are so broken and so doomed beforehand to never be truly happy; because someone will break if the others go together. And then the two who are together can't be truly happy because they broke the third person. Ah, it's so complicated. shakes head They should have a threesome! wink But then again; it would still be an angsty threesome, and Sakura would definitely be the odd one out in this story. rethinking But then; somehow both Sasuke and Naruto gives up their happiness for Sakura, but she can't become happy like that either. And it's so sad that all of them thinks it's their fault. It takes... uh... three... to tango, right? snicker And I feel very sorry for Kakashi. He feels like a failure of a teacher, poor guy. But he really isn't. In the end I think it was best that Sasuke died. Ok it was really sad and all but he had too much baggage; I don't think he would have become truly happy. Both he and Naruto has some serious trust-issues and they wouldn't want to hurt Sakura. It would just have been too complicated for them. At least Naruto has Ataski right? wink (even if I'm a bit disturbed at his name confess). Anyways. Thankyou so much for a great story. I hope this review make up for my lack of one when I read this last time wink (but that was such a long time ago hehe). I enjoyed very much!
Bunnii 2008-06-20 ch 7,	abusekii kii kii kii great great great soo farr! :D
NARUTO x SASUKE FOREVER PUN... 2008-06-17 ch 20,	abuseOMFG!! Your story is utterly amazing!! My god, your writing skills are just WOW. Almost every chapter, I had tears streaming down my face. I nearly used a whole box of tissue and I also have a bad case of sore eyes. BUT. It was all worth it. Fanatastic job! thumbs-up Lee style The alternate ending and the original ending are both awe-some!! Although, I prefered the alternate ending, the original was just as excellent. I just wanted Naruto to be Sasuke in the end, tha`s probably why I liked the alternate ending. ^^ Now, I really want to read Hotblooded, so I'm signing off.
yuis 2008-06-11 ch 20,	abuseAn oldie but a goodie. You made good use of whatever information the manga provided back then, but with the revelations Kishimoto-san has been dealing out recently some of it is outdated. Gorgeous ending, but damn if I didn't wish that both of the lovely boys and Sakura would find happiness. Language could use some editing, I think it'll be realy worth it to polish up this story. As it stands, the occasional fault is slightly jarring and detracts a little from the gorgeous, gorgeous plot. The gun part made me D:. Your insight into the destructive nature of humans rang so true. One of the most idealistic things about the ninja in Naruto is that they have some honour, but a gun is really a hit below the belt. Oh, for Sasuke to die such an ignoble death! The story really moved me in places, and the thought that you might have improved then makes me look forward to what else you might write. Good job :) Really loved it.
its-dei-chan-un 2008-06-05 ch 20,	abuseThis story made me cry... poor Naruto, poor Sasuke... is there a 21st chapter? If there is, I'd like to read it. my email is . This story is so going on my fav list. \ This is the second fanfic ever that has made me cry. :'( Wonderful job. Tobi
monkeyface17 2008-05-29 ch 20,	abuseit was such a wonderful story, I really enjoyed it (stayed up till 4 in the morning reading it)...but i wished sasuke never died. I cried. heh heh.
DemonEclipse 2008-05-22 ch 20,	abusewrite a sequel!yes...yes...the person that died wasnt sasuke...but they thought it was sasuke...sasuke has been taken and abused and kept...but by who?...PLEASE!Im hyperventilating here!
DemonEclipse 2008-05-21 ch 9,	abuseur lemon rocks.full stop.

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