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Reviews for: Harry Potter and the Oregon Trail
The Jello Mould
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
That is some funny shite. I recognize the log coming straight from the Original Oregon Trail and you just added the ad-ins which is about as excellent as it can get.

Anyways, keep up the good work. The only complaint: If you had font changes that differentiated the beginning part for Ron/Hermione/Neville/Harry, it was lost in the transfer and should be indicated via a different method: underline, italics, bold. I almost didn't read it because I thought it wasn't going to be comprehensible.

But other than that, this is quite good.

Laters!
totalbookworm61
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
heehee. I loved it! I thought it was so funny!
Still Smiling.
2004-10-16 . chapter 1
I LOVED that story, but, how could I not, I'm a huge Oregon Trail freak. It was REALLY, REALLY good, especially the part about Ron's clothes and Neville's addiction. The only objection I have is that even though they call it the Red Vermillion river, Vermillion means red. So technically they call it the Red Red River.
Laura Granger
2004-08-26 . chapter 1
ha ha ha
that was funny I really liked it.
Especially the part with the guy from Back to the Future
heyjupiter
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
thanks for the reviews, guys! keep 'em coming :)
in response to the inevitable nitpicks, i will paraphrase the mystery science theatre theme song: "just repeat to yourself 'it's just a fic, i should really just relax!'"

alternately, there's the clerks solution to plotholes: "uh... the force?"
liseli
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
i love how you tied this all together! and the bit about harry wanting to shoot the gun.

did you acctually just play the game and name your characters hermione, harry, ron, and neville?if so, i loved how you filled it in, but how did you prevent them from dying?

-liseli
Tim Chs
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
HAH HAH HAH HAH!
Absolutely Brilliant
(Though I should note that smallpox is/was incredibly contagious and virulent, it probably would have wiped out half of them)
Great mini-crossover though
Lady Cecilia
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
cute. very cute
DRNaughtyGirl
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
I took one look at the summary and figured, oh wow, this is going to be FUNNY! Reading the whole thing to find that this was an explanation to McGonagall? I fell off my chair! You should write more stories like this involving other characters, it would be a HIT!
Maggy Aethelwynsdottir
2004-06-04 . chapter 1
Um...that was...different...Why were they in the US to begin with? The time turner can only take you back in time, not to another place.
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