Finally! I get to the last chapter for this book!

Been kinda busy, but hey, awesome job! Too many words to describe what I'm thinking about the chapters that I've read... but I need to voice my opinion on the matriarchal village: good gawd would I have had some fun in that village!

Interesting...

He turned--Human?? Wow...

Nice! You grasped the concept of stiffs being incapable to smile and that a smirk is all they can accomplish...
A jealousy comes in many forms, don't it?

Whoa... un-happy Johnny...

My reading streak is going down.. I'm just facing a few conflicts...
It's awesome to see the Majestics here! I'd like to slap Robert's pompous face :P

Ne when Konoha chan told me she reviewed all the chapters she read so far, she wasn't kidding! I loved how you wrote this so far and I hope you don't hold it against me if i didn't review at first, I just wanted to finish as fast as possible

Hehe... awesome...

YES! ABOUT TIME THE TWO WERE INTRODUCED!
And a DOUBLE YES for Kai winning that one. XP

A downer? That's a straight kick in the knee...
Max is awesome here... A lot more mature, yet he still has that playful side about him... It was about time I saw his face in this fic anytime soon...

"A grin the size of Jupiter..." dude, that's priceless!XD

That was cute... to a certain degree...
If there is a relic for Rei I speculate there will be one for Kai... (kinda playin on the sacred bit beasts, right?)

Woww... I'm amazed the Kai of this fict is a genius in patching up his mistakes.
Kudos to you! And poor Bryan, I hope he will not get blinded by vengeance too much

Haha... That's a funny ending..

I've had to say this to a couple people before: characters are subject to change whether they are cannon or not... if you keep the characters they way they usually are... things will get vey boring.
I appreciate your use of OOC