great story

I liked it alot. Good job.

that was great! it was sad and beautiful! lovely!

Huh? I'm so confused!

I hate to be the bearer of bad news, Plot already professionally used. Read "Heir To The Empire," "Dark Force Rising," and "The Last Command." Leia has children way before Luke is even married, two twins, Jacen and Jaina. Later she has a son, Anikan. Luke doesn't even get married for another good ten years, and then to a woman named Mara Jade. Also, Luke could never name a daughter after a mother whose name he doesn't even know.

Just so everyone knows...I've never read the books. I've been a fan since I was little and when I stumbled upon FF.Net, I just wrote a couple stories based on my own storyline. Anyways, later!

Where did you get those awful names? Gaiety? Tanner-Jules? Hey, you missed Craig, and Trevor.

Good ending!

I am so confusd. Is Padme Elo-aura Luke's wife? That just seems kinda wrong.

Good job, but with all these names it is confuing! Who is/was Luke's wife?

Doesn't really go with the books, but hey it's your story! Can't wait to read the rest!

um...what? I am SO lost!

Wow! Really enjoyed this story! Please write a sequel!

I eagerly await the next part! I'll be watching.(Force that sounds criptic. Like I"m going to assassinate you or something.) Awesome job!

Did you ever read the books? Or did you just not like them and make up your own stuff? I like the story, but I keep trying to match it up with the books.