very good I will wait for the next one:P

very sweet! though it is kinda sad.

A cute one-shot.
I liked the subtle play on the emotions. Very nice. Nothing over-dramatic or overtly emotional. Just some nice heartfelt time together.
You spelled Makino differently twice, and I wonder if you did so purposely for nickname/petname purposes or if it was just an easy mistake.

will you continue? i hope you do.

All right.. I know this was prolly a one-shot. but I loved it soo much that I think you should write ontehr chapter! Please? Pretty please? PLEASE!

Anna-chan

Yeah! I love Makino/Shanks and ya don't find many! This was well written. More chapters please!

*sigh*
O This is so romantic...
Please can this story have more chapters I want it to go on!

Very nice, very nice! I noticed a few typos, but everyone has to deal with those. I also noticed a paragraph that seemed a whole lot like one from another Shanks/Makino fic I had read, but it was changed enough that I know you weren't trying to rip it off or anything. In fact, I rather liked this fanfic! There should be more Shanks/Makino fics out there. Thank you very much for making one more to add to the list!

Very nice. Shanks rules =D

You keep messing up on her name, no offense. Sometimes you said Mikino, and sometimes you said Miko. Otherwise, it's really good. We need more Makino/Shanks in the world. ^^