no you cant end it there, i loved this story. i want more, please write more. i want to know what Dudley saw. please make more. later dude.

wot?? wot?? why?? why didnt u explain wot dudley saw! please explain it!! do another chapter! please please this one was so good!

M, interesting, very interesting tought here we have...
and we don't evew know if we end with a permanently "closed door" oe we have only a bit of a shock.
Well written, good idea.

I hate Dudley, he's such a... BEEP. HArry has gone through so much and all Dudley does is call him a freak... I'd like to hurt him very much. That made no sense... Oh well. This was wonderful.

very interesting. I was kind of hoping for a better connection between the two of them, rather than disgust, but of course it's important that not all stories have happy endings. ;P
Well written - cheers!

I thought this was excellent. Your characterizations of Harry and Dudley are dead on perfect. Very original having them accidentally legilimize each other.

Yours~Anne

Yeah, that fits.

wonderful fic as always!! wonder what Dudley saw... and how did Harry do that?

I was truly enjoying your shorty until the end .It sucked!Sorry .Just my opinion.

That was really good.

...the more they stay the same...good work!