I was really surprised at how you managed to wrap things up. At the end of chapter 5, I thought okay, this story is "complete" but how is one more chapter supposed to make a good ending with all these complications? it ended a lot better than I thought it would. nice job! =D

whoa - chad is going on an insane rampage here!

274 is an awkward, babbling idiot in front of cree? if you ask me, that's pretty funny.

I was wondering...does bizarro really know about kenjutsu? ahah

"It was cold as death, and burned." Great line - and since the hand is Father's, it makes perfect sense. You characterize Chad so well..and I always mean to read your fics, but since chad/cree are low on my point of interest, it's not a surprise that I haven't read too many of your stories - but still, they're good. =D

I've read this before and now I'm coming back to review.

This story... took my breath away. There was angst, drama, and sometimes, the little beautiful things in life that somehow make things okay. I love how yuo characterize Chad, and you made me love the Cree/Chad pair. There's just something amazing in this story of yours, I dunno what. Maybe it's how you so perfectly put into words Chad's feeling of betrayal and his grudge, the developing 'crush' on Cree, and... oh man, I just love it. Truly and utterly.

Yeah! All ends...pretty well. Decommissioned, living well. Nice.

SO MUCH ANGST! CHAD! NO! :D Jk. I like this fic. Its really good. Nice chapter. Poor Chad.

Aw, a small, yet cute, ChadxCree moment. *sigh* KAWAII! Well, off to read the rest! Nice chappie!

GROWTH SPURT! I love getting those! People go: Wow! Your so tall now!! I wish I was that tall...etc. But I'm still kinda short. T.T Great chapter, I'm off to read the rest!!

Wow. Chad, depression, failing school, sad story. I NEED TO READ MORE!! I love this fic! Its awesome!!

Ooh. I like the way you write. Poor Chad. And he looks really hot in the shirtless picture you drew, but thats kinda off topic. ^^ Nice fic, I have to read the rest!

AW! That was soo cute! Thank you for the wonderful story! Yay! I'm happy!

That was done really well, really beautiful. I love Chad/Cree, they're just so convenient :) I am in love with this story, and I'm definitely gonna check out more fics of yours...Just so you know ;) A warning.

I've never saw that epidsode, END. And now I really, really want to. I can just imagine it now: Chad fighting till the end, Cree finally coming to the rescue. It's like, I hardly ever see any of the serious KND epidsodes, just the insanely funny ones. Hmm...Go figure.

I liked the angry, go pycho Chad. It fits, and you know, this is the first story I read out of the KND P.O.V. Sad, I know. But ANYway, I find no fault with this story [none] and I'm glad it was on the short side. It made it so much better :) If that makes any sense...

Hi! I love your story, and I ADORE your art! I based two fics on it!
But, an interesting fact about your picture of Cree reading: you mentioned how no 'cool' characters wear glasses? If you've seen no P in the OOL, Numbuh Five wears glasses (while reading, anyway. Maybe it runs in the family?)