I like the way sex is treated maturely in the story, dealing more with feelings and reactions than the actual deed. This was the first of your Ryoga x Ukyo stories I stumbled on and I loved it. Such a sweet, awkward moment. Sorry the review was so long in coming.

FTW! I really like how you wrote out this scene between Ukyo and Ryoga. :)

I don't know how I had missed this one before, but this story was on par with everything else I have read from you. No complaints and something that I would recommend to my friends. I am once again blown away by your impressive ability to humanize your characters.

Simply loved it, as all of your other stories. Please never stop writing about R&U!!

hey ninnik!

I've always loved your ryouga and ukyo stories. You give the characters more depth. Thanks yet again!

Now this was a story I needed to read, best Lemon I've ever read ever.

Thank you.

This is an excellent story! I can't believe you only made one chapter! Oh my God you really do have a talent for the craft of filling in the blanks, but this story left for so much more. I would fight you for an epilouge or something. Anyway, I'm adding you to my favorites list and I'm going to read more of your stories, I hope they are all this good.

Cupid

woohoo! Mildly graphic "T" rated Ryoga/Ukyo story! YEAH! -hyper from too much Oreos and "Samurai Champloo"-

No, seriously. I loved this one a lot. Ninnik you are now my favorite Ryo/Ukyo fanwriter.

What can you say about this but one word,

Brilliant!

Not only in the way each reacted but of how they finally understood that what they did was of their own volition.

Seems your a "Big" Ryouga/Ukyo Fan and I agree Akari simply isn't Ukyo and so Ryoua can do no better.

Hope you also think about Ranma and Akane and with your other story your doing them justice as well.

Down the road I woiuld like to see you tackle a non- canon pairing, either Ranma/Kasumi, or Ranma/Nabiki.

You notice I didn't want Ryouga or Ukyo with anyone else!

dennisud

Heh heh...
Why didn't you publish this one Casual Elegance? Have you been holding out on me? ::cracks whip::
Ah well. I'm gonna agree with the other reviewer in that this is probably a PG-13 piece, but other than that... I liked it. It was cute, but also moved into their actual relationship. Nice. Ukyo + Ryoga = Joy
~Kobi-chan

OMG that was so cute!
I think it's more of a PG-PG13 rating though, but it was good!