Great story but when do you plan on updating. I first read this story nearly a two weeks ago.

Great story, very well written. Although I just can't see Faramir in the light you've put him in.

A well written and touching story,thank you

Excellent story, with a real talent for dialogue. You captured Faramir's pain perfectly.

Yep, I can see this as a movie faramir fic. A very interesting tale, and very engrossing too, I felt involved with the story so that I forgot I was reading and felt like I was just listening to a conversation. I think that's a rare thing. It shows that you write good dialogue. There's one thing I would comment on, and that would be that we are very firmly in Aragorn's head for the whole peice, yet there's two little bits where we slip into Faramir's and it didn't seem to fit. hmm I'll have to go back and try and spot it
ah - > Faramir clenched his fists. The thought ran around his head, 'I ... etc.. this tiny pasage, and ->He took a long swig, using the time to calm his jangling nerves. - you could change this last on to "seemingly using the time..." because then Aragorn would be observing what he thought was happening rather than us being inside faramir's head. I'm not sure what to do about the first bit. I really like the bit too, it just didn't fit.
hmm - yes well i'm dying to read the new chaps of home to heal so I'm going to ration it out between paragraphs of the essay I'm writing. Thanks in advance :D
IceAngel

This piece of fanfiction was breathtaking and so very - gentle? *lol* I can't think of any words at the moment, so please bear with me. I loved how you characterized Aragorn and Faramir and how Aragorn "healed" Faramir's guilt and heart. Fantastic job!

Well the story is wonderful, as always. Unfortunately, my mind is fixed on Faramir as a near perfect - no, make that perfect - human being. And innocent too. Very unrealistic, but my Faramir! I think I've got too used to him being the victim. But it's enjoyable and very well written. I'll cope... ;)

A well-written story, even if it is not about the Faramir I most admire. Good detail on the relationship of Faramir and Aragorn.

Well - I think this is very well written - I love the way Aragorn is a "friend" to Faramir. I HATE having Faramir behave so badly! It is hard for me to see him that way. Well done.

Yeah, not really how I see Faramir acting either. But very well-written. (Funny that you picked the name Miriel- I was tossing that around as a name for a daughter he and Eowyn would have!)