Education is the first step to a cure.

Indeed it is Good job on these one

All your stories that I've read are great and this one is no exception. Demona's concessions for Thailog may seem trivial but they show the insidious nature of abuse. Hopefully this story will act as a wakeup call for someone in a similar situation.

I really like your writing style. As if Thailog isn't evil enough trying to kill people, he's abusive, which makes him even more contemptible. So nice job :) Kind of ironic, too, considering Demona thinks Angela is Goliath's latest fling. Keep on writing!