Bravo madam, bravo!

yes we adore your story and cant wait for the updates but we think you should do a page break when you change provs.

When I read the Iliad and Hector died I an honestly say that I cried - so thank you so much for letting him live! Hector is the greatest hero in all of the Ancient world!

I noticed as I was reading that you have a very slight Homeric style, which made me really pleased when I was reading this. There were a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing that detracted from your fantastic storyline!

I love your writing style and enjoyed the story immensely! I look forward to reading more of your work!

You should publish something in the Iliad under books - there are only two fics there and I think the section would enjoy your style!

Hi!

I just wanted to tell you that I LOVED your story, it was very interesting and well written. I was wondering if you had any plans in writing a sequal? Maybe one that is about the relationship between Hector/Adromacnhe and Briesies/Achilles.

Anyway take care,

Caterina

v.good well done. and paris, hector or achilles didn't die! YEY!

O my GOD! I can't believe it, I would have never thought that your story would be so great!

Guess you exeeded my expectations! Just jocking!

Anyways, I am glad that you took me in count and that you didn't decide to kill Achilles, even if that does happen in the true story, I find better your way!

Hope you'll continue writting more stories, and remember you'll always have a fan!((me!:P))

See ya! Good Luck!

hugs!

it's quite lovely, but i noticed some grammar mistakes that i felt need mentioning.

"it's" means "it is," first off. to show ownership of a thing, it becomes "its" without the apostrophe. i also noticed that you often wrote "and" instead of "an." that's a common mistake that spellcheck can't catch...i've done that before too. also, you haven't been using apostrophes to show ownership with people which makes it confusing to the readers. when you are addressing someone in dialogue, you ALWAYS put commas around the name. for example, "it was you, my king, who..." not, "it was you my king who..." it just makes it easier to read.

on the accuracy of your story: it's accurate enough, except that the trojans (which you misspelled "trosians" throughout) were not part of the greek empire. they were their own mini-empire, running the trade from the aegean into the black sea. that's why paris was able to run off with helen, because he and hector had no part in helen's betrothal to menelaus (also why hector did not have to fight for menelaus...he didn't take the oath, because he wasn't there...it's a pity really, b/c then paris wouldn't have dared to take off with helen).

i really did enjoy this story. especially the idea that briseis meets achilles pre-movie. i rather fancy the idea that when he left, she decided that since she couldn't have him, she'd have no one. and then by the time the war rolls around, she's bitter that he's fighting for the greeks instead of the trojans. i hope you write a sequel, because you're talented and i want to hear (er, read) more from you. keep up the good work! sere mi eru...lsoa

I've read all of this amazing story and I must say it was very well written. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more of your work.

SO good! The best H/A I've read so far! I really, really, really loved it!

This had to be one of THE best Troy stories I have ever read!

It had everything a brilliant story needs, suspense, action, more that I can say.

I LOVED it and enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your stuff :)

You write the best action scenes!

Go Hector! Go Achilles! Die Lyshenko. :)

Really love the friendship you've created between Hector & Achilles. They've got good camaraderie. Your OCs aren't bad either, Lyshenko dastardly evil, Dionysus loyal friend(Heh, one wonders if the God Dionysus protected him ;). Sitras the traitor.

Loved the happy endings.

The Hector and Andromache conservation was so sweet. I think you should write a Paris and Helen story and Hector and Andromache it could be one story.

hey, this is pretty good. i'm glad to see a friendship between Hector and Achilles

Oh wow.

That was a really good read.

Very entertaining. I hope you continue! I would love to see more of this!

*gives you best puppy eyes*

I like this Hector and Achilles friendship. I hope you write more soon.