good chapter. What happens next? tell me!

Nice story. Use some derail to describe the buildings and rooms. Other wise, GREAT! Update soon!

Not bad, not bad-

I've read your last story and if that's any indication, this one shouldn't be bad at all.

Anyhow, nothiing more to say, so Adios.

This sounds like it could be a good story, assumnigg that the Prologue is around 100x longer then every chapter. Good luck in future writing