nice story )

I liked how Vegeta took off his clothes and there was more clothes plus the shoes lol it cracked me up

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OMG AW! I very well nearly melted at the end! *sigh*

cant wait for more

gross

That was an excellent beginning, it really grabbed my attention. I'll be sure to continue read it. Please keep writing.

Love this story I am so happy that you updated. Did Vageta have Gohan I mean was he prego with Gohan? I can't what to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

I've always loved your fics. Don't remember reviewing one before though... o_o

The first chapter was well written and you painted a very vivid picture. You are a bit comma happy though and it makes the fic hard to read when one has to keep pausing and trying to separate run-on sentences.

The story seems pretty good and i think you're mean to keep us all in suspense. You seem pretty talented and considering what else i've seen, got a good imagination. Maybe you an give me some tips so i can try my own Fanfic. Keep on writing. can't wait to read the rest

update please

O... exciting. Man, you make me feel so bad for Vegeta. His life on Frieza's base was so terrible. Will they come back to get them? Will his happiness last? I can't wait. Awesome story.

O! Damn cliffies! ... ::sighs:: ... Well aside from that it kicked ass.

Well i just got done read the chapters and i liked it. I can bet on it thats either goku's brother who's there or frieza.Well update soon please

Hi, I use to be Queenoftheworld99. Anyway, I love this chapter that you FINALLY update! Keep up the good work, and I hope that the next ones longer

I love this story Please write more I have been waiting a long time for another chapter