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Keep going. I don't really know what to say. I love this story.

Another amazing chapter, I feel so sorry for Ash, leaving everything you've known behind is tough. Keep up the good work.

where are you
write some more
i can't stop thinking about this fic

where are you write some more this is one ofmty favorites

GOOD STORY! keep it up! well g2g bye

This is really good. I love this story!

This submit is very creative. The story gives alot of detail, setting a picture in your mind, which makes it feel like you're watching a movie, more than reading. ^_^...So, being hard to entertain with leterature, this piece really gets through and I enjoyed it, very much!

This submit is very creative. The story gives alot of detail, setting a picture in your mind, which makes it feel like you're watching a movie, more than reading. ^_^...So, being hard to entertain with leterature, this piece really gets through and I enjoyed it, very much!

This submit is very creative. The story gives alot of detail, setting a picture in your mind, which makes it feel like you're watching a movie, more than reading. ^_^...So, being hard to entertain with leterature, this piece really gets through and I enjoyed it, very much!

This story is good so far. I like the storyline. I wonder.. what DOES Manny hide? I think maybe she's adopted.. or maybe she was raped.. I dunno..

Anyway,

AWESOME STORY! Keep up the good work!

~Sammy

that was really good! Hurry up with the next chapter please! ^__^

Well I was definatly into the story. Your writing feels like a step above Young Adult read but not quite Adult. I want more of the story it was getting really good. You write like a professional. ^_^

I love this story. You capture Ashley well.

i absolutely love it! your ff is going so good! i cant wait for the next part!