Great start, well done, this is a good idea.

Just, first, please write the translations of the elvish you use alongside the actual elvish in brackets instead of making the reader skip down to the bottom of the page and loose the place etc.

Apart from that- great stuff, update soon!

heyy! i loove how you're portraying legolas and aragorn together..its so cute and sweet, aww legolas is so innocent and pure, i loved the first kiss scene! you're doing a great job, keep it up! :D

Wow, I love this story! And the elvish is so fun to read, lol. _

great story so far. i cant wait for more, i think you shoulda add ina little jealousy for aragorn and competition as well. it would do to make things even more hectic and interseting.

Yay, I'm glad you updated. And trust me, I completely understand your writer's block. I really liked this chapter, especially the end, hehe. Can't wait for more.

GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE IT!

Luv your story! Please update soon! PLEASE?

Please wright some more, this has all the markings off a great peice of work!

I'm interested in reading more. Update soon and I'll be able to give a better review.

This is great! A beautiful moment, and it was better because you kept it simple. The song was wonderful too. Please update soon!

Ok, AND THEN WHAT HAPPENS?

OH! That was good! Please update!

I liked this, very interesting. I'm curious to find out what is going on in their heads. Update soon please!

haha

i am the first

this story seems very interesting.