Aww... another good Sam poem. ^_^ You write them so well. Good job.

This was _lovely_! Very sad and touching..well done! It flowed gorgeously and the words just fit so well. I love the line , "I hope to find you by the sea", and "your striking, speaking, and gentle blue eyes". It's so Samwise. Wonderfuly done, congrats!
I wrote a poem a little like this..-hint- it's on the same subject, Samwise missing Frodo. a little shorter. tell me what you think?

This is actually a very nice poem. I think you may mean 'are' instead of 'is' when you say 'For the days filled with your songs 'is' (are?) now silent and so on for the next 'For the days' lines. A few misspelled words such as alter(ed) and change(ed) in the last sentence but a sweet poem overall.