This is a really interesting fic! I loved the structure, based around her constant questioning of the past. A really interesting look at the story. Well done!

cool. the internal conflict works very well- it has a poetic quality to it, and the halting nature of it helps emphasize the uncertainty.

very good, something different which you wouldn't really think about.

Lot's of denial Oo; But this is good, I never really thought about his sister throughout the movie.. but it was kinda cruel of Ashitaka to give San the only keepsake he had of the Emishi..and the fact that it had been a gift from his sister.. Oh well ^_^ Good job! I like it ^^