Great story! Keep it up (please)!!

I really liked this fanfic, though I've noticed that you haven't updated in 4 years (heh). Will you by any chance update ever again?

awesome continue.

=O OMG RAIDEN! no... he can't be like grey fox that's so...sad! Excuse my hyperness but...wow im speakless i didn't expect that. Anyway's this is really a great story, I've been on the edge of my computer chair, actually quite literally, the entire story. I await the next chapter.

...why is the summary for this story related to the legend of zelda..? o-o i'm confused...

Hey. I don't know if you still do this fanfiction, but I just thought I'd mention: I read this originally, about six months ago or something, and it has not been updated. I can see that you have had only a few reviews. (More than I have, I might add.) But this is the beginnings of a great fanfiction, and i would advise you continue with it. Anyway. Just thought I'd randomly mention.

Well, sayonara.

This story is really nice! I LUV it! Please update sooner! :D

Like ohmygod!! Josephs back! That was horrible how his own father could betray him like that! Is Cassandra the mother of Carls twin sisters cousin?? And when will Jessica admit her love for Carl? And is she ever going to learn that Carl is actually in love with Henry? Will Frank ever awake from his coma, and will he still remember Crystal, Carls mother in law? Is it true about Kents past? Will he ever tell that to Larissa? That is so awful i feel so sorry for him! Will Larry ever survive the war to final meet his long lost cousin, Carl in New Orleans before his wife dies of cancer? And what will Vikky choose, her career as a world famous designer, or her love with Henry? And what about Rick? You never did really explain about how he survived the car accident with only a scratch! I think that Carl somehow saved his life! Why is it that you keep mentioning that Carl cant multitask very good? And why does everything include Carl, are you like obsessed with him or something? Is he like maybe your boyfriend in the real world? Ohmygod! If he's anything in real life like he is in the story, then you are like one lucky girl! Cuz if he is your boyfriend, then you like better watch your sisters back! She could be trying to steal him from you! Like, that goes against all the rules of feminism and the bible. Like, you gotta follow the bible. Speaking of which, you cant have Carl liking Henry. God created Adam and Eve, not Adam and Steve. I was like going threw your reviews, and some people were mentioning this Snake guy. I dont remember hearing about him, am I like missing something? Other than that, I really like your story. Update it soon. I have to know about Carl.

Well?!

What happens next?!

Please post the next chapter...this story is very interesting and I'm DYING to know what happens to poor Raiden!

Pretty pretty pretty puh-leze? With a cherry on top?

Hiya Amtoro! Great chapter. Getting better, and better. Can wait to see what happens next.
Three cheers for the Amtoro!
HUZZAH!
HUZZAH!
HUZZAH!
And such'n such. AMTOR SMASH!

This story is coming along swimmingly despite the few inaccuracies.

Please continue so Ill doesn't die of suspense...what happens next to poor Raiden? And I hope the lady and Rose both get it...I bet Rose was the one who turned him in, poor guy. I always figured she would be the one to do it, if anyone did, from the games.

Well well well, so everyone's favorite little bleached blonde youngin' is back. Good job. Interesting way of trying it together. can't wait to find out who did it and why.

O_o Raiden is twentynine?! That can't be! He looks like hie's 19...20 tops...no matter, for I declare that he is 20...yes..

(Glomps Raiden hard, causing him to smash to the floor all anime style)

Anywhos...sweet chappie amtor! Get the next one out soon. And poor Raiden is injured (squeals in delight)

Karadur: "You are sick beyond all reason. You actually wish for pain and suffering to those that you love? Why didn't I think of that?"

Me: (Dao face) "Yep!" Tackles Karadur, then goes and glomps Raiden again.

...right, dont ask where that came from...I'm guessing it's a lack of sleep combined with sugar yet again...

(British Accent) Right. Carry on then.

Told ya I'd get around to reading this soon... Yah me!

Tis damn good, and you made Hal so pathetically cute!!

^_^

Nicely done, but I have a couple of problems. 1.) Didn't Snake put a tracking device on the Metal Gear RAY Ocelot/Liquid was in? and 2.) Didn't Otacon find out the names of the Patriots at the end of MGS2 and their locations, and that they were 100 years dead? No offense, but you don't seem to mention that. Minus those two things, it's nicely done.