Mediocre.

it was different. funny even. thanks

well, thats a different plot from what i've read previously. The correct spelling for caf? is cafe. I thought it was well done to tell you the truth, I don't understand why you have no other reviews I have read fics that have appaling plots and they have hundreds of reviews.

Perhaps it was because you killed off their hero?

Keep up with the writing. Hope the review helped.