Damn this was so long but it was worth the read. The story was sick and sarcastic, just like my two favorite Pack members, and I just adored how Jackal was always there for her, even if she didn't realise it at times.

When I read long stories, I usually have to read some parts over, but for this one, only one part was unclear to me. I have to ask; what exactly happened in the epilogue? I just can't seem to understand if she had a baby, is going to have a baby, whose baby is it; I'm just so unsure.

I was hooked on this story from the very first paragraph. Hyena and Jackal are suprisingly in character, and you've created an incredibly believeable background story for them. Putting Hyena in Arkham was fun, too. What more can I say? I absolutely LOVE this story!

Wow, a vulnerable Hyena. Good story, Arkham was a nice touch.

excellent story, very well written and thought out.

Wow! This story was the most amazing I have read. Jackal and Hyena are my some of my favorite characters on Gargoyles,so any story with them in it is cool.

Wow! OMG, you have so much talent. I stumbled upon this looking for something with Harley Quinn in it, by the time I was half way through I realized it was very long and Harley had a very minor part. But I was so interested in your characters and the story I just couldn't stop reading. You have a wonderful writting style, and really pulled me into this story, your descriptions are perfect and i wasn't bored for a second. Brillent! Keep up the good work.

wow. you've put alot of thought into this haven't you? well i liked it. it shows a different side of the two. the loyal side that no one else sees.

Veeeeeeeery interesting. I think that this probably how it went too. But what's this about a birth, and why DID her mother do it?