 Argentus 2008-01-26 . chapter 1It’s not often that I find something that is *exactly* what I wanted after a –let’s face it- anti-climactic ending. I always thought The Grey King left us dangling in the end- I guess that even after it ended, I wanted more absolution of Bran’s destiny and of Will’s role in his life. And this fic is *it*! It’s like an last chapter or something, and I find it very like Cooper’s style as well. I love that Will apologizes- I was kind of waiting for him to say something of that sort after he and Bran reunited. And gosh, that ceremony gave me the shivers! And I love the emotions you set here…Bran’s obvious loneliness and longing make me quite sad.
It’s also not often that I find a oneshot that’s wonderfully written and canon-compliant, and just, well, something I love enough to ‘fave’, but again, here it is ;) |
 wooden-spoon 2008-01-13 . chapter 1will and bran are really in character!:) great job. |
 Feather Qwill 2005-07-04 . chapter 1Beautiful. Sad, though, what with knowing the way it all ends. |
 Gabi Web 2005-06-05 . chapter 1I like this. It's simple, it's beautiful, it's in tune with the story and the characters, and yet, it is all yours. Very well done. Beautiful. Just beautiful. |
 light-maiden 2004-12-29 . chapter 1I could believe you were Susuan Cooper so easily... |
 BlindSeer 2004-12-14 . chapter 1 Thank you. |
 Behind Your Cover 2004-09-21 . chapter 1I can honestly say that this story made me cry. I love it!! *glomps Gramarye* I was lying in wait for someone to write one like this!! SANKYUU!! |
 YamiHikariSakura 2004-08-25 . chapter 1Very good, and what does dewin mean? i am confused? kardiahodos@yahoo.com. |
 Erfaciel 2004-06-30 . chapter 1I know that I already reviewed this on the dir-slash list, but I just read it again and I wanted to remind you of HOW MUCH I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS STORY! *cuddles Bran and Will* You rock. ^_^
I have a question for you. Do you know of a specific melody that goes to the traditional Welsh song at the beginning? And are there more verses? I'm looking for a song to sing for a church thing and this seems promising. I can't resist such beautfiul sentiment! ^_^ (if you have those answers please e-mail me or post on the list)
Thanks!
Erfaciel |
 Sam Davidson 2004-06-30 . chapter 1What can I say, another beautifully crafted piece. Whenever I read your stories I get rather depressed thinking about how utterly pitiful mine are in comparison. But on the other hand, those feelings are more than outweigheed by the joy I have in reading what you write. Your character development, description of setting, ability to convey emotion without making it sappy or sloppy... Your stories are the vest, and this one is no exception. |
 Ariene 2004-06-28 . chapter 1A wonderful piece and great final chapter to a book that never quite seemed finished (apologies to Ms Cooper). You captured the mood exactly right - a very good mixture of the light-hearted and deadly serious with a large helping of mysterious too. A lot of hand-holding though - what was that about?! Keep up the writing. (I still like your 'older Will' stories the best!) |
 sunny-historian 2004-06-28 . chapter 1Oh, gosh. Brilliant.
Very evocative, and Bran's oscillation between 11-year-old boy and High King was very convincing. I love it. Really beautiful. |
 Eldrice 2004-06-23 . chapter 1 Oh wow, your writing is amazing! This was such an excellent story, I felt that it fit in seamlessly with the Dark is Rising universe: the descriptions, characterizations, and style were just like Cooper's. It was unbelievable. Bran's loneliness at the end was heart-wrenching. I went and read the rest of your stories after I finished this one, and each was better than the last! I'm now flying through Legacy of the Light and am completely hooked (I'm getting a headache from staring at a computer screen for so many hours a day). Bottom line, I adore your writing and am eagerly awaiting whatever it is you do next! |
 L'Ananda 2004-06-06 . chapter 1Excellent! I really enjoyed this fanfiction. I think you should do something of the like for after Silver on the Tree as well. If not, oh well, but you should definitely continue writing Will fanfictions. Great job! |
 Shadowgirl1 2004-06-05 . chapter 1Very nice. *notes to herself to finish reading HP + the Legacy of the Light* I especially liked the falling back into time sequence. |