|Reviews for Shenmue: Rewrite|
| Darkside hazuki 6/9/04 . chapter 2
Lol nozomi hugs him? lol that will be the last time ryo will ever feel warm emotions! good description on the fight-and ryo's current ability was well shown through those two misses.
lenthgthen up your chapters and add more detail to ryo's surroundings-this is good.
keep it up and update soon!
| Darkside hazuki 6/8/04 . chapter 1
Hey that was pretty good!
nice added touches to cotemplate this story. i think i know what'll happen in the next chapter! update soon, pretty good writing. you make ryo seem human!