dang this story could really go places, i hope you continue.

good luck!
lamyka

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow.. loved the fic! Please continue it - I'm dying to see where this goes!

Whoa, I'm very surprised that this doesn't have more reviews. This has got to be one of the best fics in the whole Pitch Black/Riddick section. You know the characters exactly, you understand the way that the experience in PB affected them even better than David Twohy does... I'm very impressed and I can't wait for more.

I loved it and am surprised you don't have more reviews!! Update soon!

Ah! How could you just leave off like this?? I want more!

This story is incredible. I love the plot line, the fact that the planet has become the polar opposite of what it was. Jack and Riddick are in character, and your originals, wow, they rock.

I also must say that I love your style. You drag the readers in until they see, feel, taste, and hear it all. I love that.

The only thing that I'm confused on, that you didn't really explain was the whole electric-thing that Joss had to pull out of Aislin. What was that? Was it something implanted in her?

At any rate, great fic. Rock on, and I'm expecting more!