A wonderful story. I loved the appearance of the tricksters and hey, the lady of the lake got a name! Beautifully written.

Once again, an excellent fic with believable characters and a good grasp of the emotions. This story was even better than the Renard one and I loved the cameos of the Tricksters and Derrick (while reading that section I was like, "What? Who? African American, who was...oh! Elisa's BROTHER! Okay!"). Great job! Keep writing!

I've been looking for a story like this. It covers a number of issues I've been curious about, and it covers them quite well. :) I found this mostly believable, with few exceptions, and I found it very enjoyable.

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