What can one say? Nicely written; good oneshot. I guess I should spend more time here... Have you tried your hand at original fiction-I daresay you might be talented enough to be successful...

3 Booyahs! Vin

A wonderfully melancholy story that makes you feel the heart ache and loneliness of Demona. The authors brilliant use of words-highly poetic-is a major strength. An excellent read (but leaves you a little sad)!

A beautiful story for one so full of sadness.

You show Demona's point of view very well.

A beautiful story. I can feel Demona's pain at her failure to see him agian. Your description was wonderful. I enjoyed it very much!