Good

Wow, that's a really good story, is Shizu the HaoxOC, or is she the only OC? I wuv Hao, he's cuddly and cute and soft and squishy. (Has delusions of getting a Hao plushie)

That was awesome!! More please!

Ah, sugoi~! I love this fanfic! One of my favorite, from Shaman King! I love the OC! And I don't mind if she's a bit Mary-Sue... She's fine with me. *shrugs*
That's great when all the characters stay in character, I'm sick of Ren and Hao being all romantic and such... So good job!
Also, the title is nice, I hope the further plot will reveal its true meaning... I love that kind of stories!
Please, write more!! You left such a Cliffhanger, I hate them! >.< Update, update, update! *whines* Hey, I'm warning you, I can be really troublesone if needed! (quoting Shikamaru...)
Ja ne!

Dis fic is great even if da OC is a Mary-sue as long as it end up she being 2gether wit hao!!I luv it 4 sure(dun tke it seriously,though im 2 nt quiet sure of myslf)!!Anyway UPDATE SOON PLZ!i've waited long enuf..PLZ??!!PEACE!

Cool! I likey!

Awesome story^^ update soon^^
I love ur jap translations at the end they help^^
ps i have been wodering for a whle what is a mary-sue?
please e-mail me

Nice

-amused glint in eye- wonder what will happen..

I love this story . It's kinda exciting for me . But sometimes I have to pull out a Japanese To English translation dictioinary .. Hahaha I love it !! UPDATE !!

I love your story,but I don't understand some places(those places are written in japanese)

Y arent u updating diz fic...? I've been waiting 4 so long...Pls update...pls...

(squeals like a little school girl) YATTA! ((Wait, i AM a school girl..))

O.o!

Right. So on with my review:

I'm going to make you pay for that cliff-hanger! No pun intended.. (eye gleams with evil) >:D

Well, maybe if you update, I won't.

please continue...

Great story. I love it. by the way which part of Malaysia are you from? KL? Penang? 0_o sorry if my question bothers you, but I'm just curious. It's seldom to see Malaysians write fanfics.