; I rather enjoy fics that kill of Usagi, actually. Kind of scary, isn't it? XD

You know, this isn't so half-baked after all. After reading this, if this would've been tied in with the real series years ago, then it would've explained A LOT. A good little story! Sayonara...

The story was good, just a few grammar mistakes here and there. Write more!

awwwwwwwww...that was sooooo sad! good idea! ahhhhhhh i cried!

Nice story. The chapters are a bit short and could use a bit more describing, in my opinion, but that's just based on my own funky way of writing _ Nice job.

*grumbles* why don't ya finish it? I luv it!

Your story makes no sense.

LOVE THEM ALL!

good chapter opener. write the rest soon

Luv the story! Can't wait until the next chapters are out!

oh. my. god. (in other words, great)

Short, but approved. You did very well, now you only need to write more.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...how could u stop there? u so mean! write quickly! the supense is killin' me and i hate it!

I think this story has awsome potential, but I think it would be a helluva lot better if you wrote more. Ne?

ooh!