love ur last sentence! loved this story! it was so cute! keep it up!

hehe...that was funny

lool

This is a great and hilarious fanfic General K-Star.

This fanfic is excellent the way it is, so I wouldn't change anything if I were you.

You have talent in humor and very good writing skills. I wish you good luck in your future fanfics.

(You are one of my favorite authors, so I put you in my list!)

P.S: You might know me.

Dude... good moral! That Ron... they underestimated him. But I don't think Neville accidently dropped that first balloon... *frowns*