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| Xx Trinity xX 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Haunting and angsty. I like it. Beautifully done. I bet this is the first time you got so many reviews for one chapter, isn't it?? Oh, how I'd love to have even half this number of reviews for my crappy oneshots. XD oh well, this deserves the reviews and luvage that it's getting!! |
| Potterwing 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abusethat was good |
| jenna51980 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseHee! I just discovered this story today...it was super cute. I liked your idea that brief glimpses of the other Chris were starting to pop up, reminding Piper and Leo that the two Chris' are actually the same person. Nicely done! |
| Rkhiara 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! |
| Witty-Kate 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseaww sweet |
| teal-lover 2005-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abusetoo lazy to log in, but this is a really beautiful story. Nicely done:) |
| Nathy1000000 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseThis seemed really interesting. I loved Chirs here, especially when he was discussing with Wyatt. The kids were very funny, and Piper's reaction was very sad and proper. This seems like a really interesting story. Good idea! |
| shyeye 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuselike it |
| Stoneage Woman 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseAw, so sweet. I LOVE Chris stories. You rock. |
| rain-on-my-soul 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. It's so sad thinking about Chris dying. But it's funny to think of him getting in trouble. Love it. :heart: |
| Bluley 2004-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've only just found and read this story. I enjoyed it a lot. Like Piper, I could easily see future Chris in the young Chris of your story. I was impressed that with so few words you estalished such a vivid sense of the relationships between the various characters. |
| Dalakh 2004-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw kinda bittersweet -very good :D |
| Pic-a-boo-I-C-U 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseShe probaly would feel that way i mean i look at little wyatt and think why cant he be as little as he was. |
| silvermoon8705 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseNice start...it's kind of creepy how Chris seems to have some of Future Chris lurking inside of him somewhere...but it's a really interesting on how you showed that through facial expressions...and poor Piper still in denial...must be really hard for her. Are you going to update this or do another story? You definitely should! |
| karen 2004-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sweet yet kind of sad at the same time, if you get were I'm headed with this review. Keep on writing, you're really good at getting their emotions. |