This was excellent, I love it! Bravo!

Your story was very well done' I thoroughly enjoyed it!

This was a marvelous work of fiction! It will be added to my favorite stories list, you can count on that.

Oh. My. Gosh! that story was amazing! You are such a talented writer - I enjoyed every second of it!

It was amazing how you created this entire new world around Peter Pan...I am a fan through and through.

I am definitely gonna check out your other stories (If you have them on here lol) and if you write on any other sites - I would love to read those as well!

Great Job!

Eloquent, beautiful, and perfectly encapsulating the mystery and magic of storytelling and imagination. I know it's been a while since this story was completed, but I just read it and I couldn't help but express my awe at the way you have with words, much like Wendy Darling herself. :) You've captured the essence of growing up and yet retaining the spark of imagination in this story.

What a beginning...!

Wow! I only recently saw Peter Pan and was much enamoured with our charming villain there, hence my search for some quality fanfiction.

But dear God... this is one of those stories that goes above and beyond good quality right into the realms of the exquisitely enchanting.

I'm afraid I have almost all but forgotten about poor Captain Hook while being thoroughly enthralled by your creation. Fortunately they appear to be somewhat of the same entity ;-)

Wendy Darling has nothing on you, my dear. I am thoroughly enraptured.

a lovely chapter once again. something about this chapter that is reminicent of Abarat.(another favorite book of mine.

these are some realy nice minor charectors.

This is an extreemly good begining! I haven't read any more than the first chapter yet and, aleready, I'm "Hooked."

My god, I love this story. It's so creative and you've drawn us a picture of this world so vividly... Thank you for sharing!

Wow. Well, I found this story just yesterday, and I've already read it twice. You've made me fall in love with Jack Winterkiss with your enchanting writing style and marvelous creativity. I sincerely hope you will write another fanfiction, as I've so thoroughly enjoyed this that I was saddened when I finished--hence the second reading.
I hope I may soon delight in other of your literary endeavors!
WELL done!

Involving a rat and a brick. That made me so very happy. ^_^

It's been a good, long while since I've been so entranced by a fanfic. I'm enjoying this immensely, and my chores are suffering for it! Oh well, in pursuit of greatness, sacrifices must be made, and you can take that as a compliment.
Oh, and I love what I assume is a homage to Labrynth, with the eyeball lichen(?).

I'm thoroughly delighted with your creativity, your period-accurate vocabulary, and your poetic and picturesque descriptions! Reading on! ^_^