Loving this awesome story please update.

Hey I really like your story I always print them out and read them in my room please come out with a new one soon

Man, it's been awhile. Yep as always, mine suck, yours don't. Giggity! Anyways, I'm contemplating a Jak story. And comtemplating putting up an old one I'd started. Oh yes. Shut up, me. Bye! EXPLODY!

I'm alive! Really! And I'm glad to see that this fic is still alive, too! This is just so insanely awesome. I like Cracky. She reminds me of me when I get WAY to sugar high and a bazillion and one ideas form in my head at once. No, it's not drugs, drugs are bad. Sugar is my one true love! Yay, pixy stix!

Its been a while. Good chap. Cant wait for the next

awesome work! I was starting to think u'd died! took u long enough to post! ah well.. wat r u gonna do right? well great chapter, can't wait for the next one, hope it come out sooner thou

O Jak is pissed...wow, hate to have him aim it at me! lol! Update soon! Thanks!

Sugoi! You updated another fic! I liked this new chapter, the dialogue was great, and the plot wasn't too hard to pick back up from context. That's always nice.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go die from joy. *Spasms and falls to the ground twitching from the wonderful updateedness*

yay! update! it's been...*counts on fingers* a long time! but this was a good chapter! slitter almost godt anouther hole to breath out of messing with jak. XD I prolly woulda aimed lower. XD

Ah, man. Slitter is so cool I could scream! XD! Another wonderful chapter, Krin! *hugs you*

This was awesome! I really loved it! It's so funny and the joke with the lave lamps was great..! :D Keep it up and have fun! Awesome work again mate! It just keeps getting better and better! _*

Izzy

Wow! They told me ya were a good author, but 'good' is simply not strong enough to describe this fic! UPDATE!

Finally! Lol, anyway, I'm really enjoying the story, update soon! (Or else evil chickens will make very bad things happen)

This sequel was great, I rally really liked i! I'm so dying for more, so plz plz update soon! Excellently amazingly work mate! Keep it up and have fun! _*

Izzy

I think I would just scream at them and feel better. So totally worth it. Heh heh...I don't know why but I like fics with very superstitious Haven ppl harrassing Jak...usually because they end violently, but you get my drift.

Lovely story. Both of them. It's very addictive, your writing. You should post a warning sign.