love it

sentimental, but not over the top. Quite in character I might say.

OMG. This is wonderful. Thank you for writing it.

interesting.

I really enjoyed reading this. It was insightful and made me wish JK Rowling had written HP differently. Thank you for writing it instead ^_^

Wonderful, wonderful story.

"...he had tried."--I really liked that.

Heartwarming. That was an amazingly refreshing view on the happenings in the books. Great story.

that was really nice, i was choked up with emotion because of it.

It was so nice and so in character. I mean, really, while this story does have something that would perhaps never would have happened in canon, it sure sounds like it.

I think this is one of the best mentorSeverus stories or oneshots that I have ever read...because it's backed up by canon completely

*SNIFF* i love it. LOVE it. bravo.

An interesting idea. I found the interaction very believable, and I thought you made a good point about how Snape was the only one who ever saw Harry for what he really was - just a boy.

The willow leaf chain was a lovely touch.

Very well-written!

Brilliant! Very touching.

Nie One! Sorry your story got plagerized