Cute! I love it!

I thought it was adorable~
>> I wonder how the R version might have been...Mumbles on..^.^;;

I -love- it. You totally need to do more Gravi fics.

Very Good for 1:30 in the moring.

Wow! That was so cute! Good short story! Even though it was written early, you managed to make the story short and put a unexpected ending. Nice!

Rowan: Cute one-shot!
Sakura: I don't smell the artificial lemon though.
Rowan: *glare* is that all you think of?
Sakura: *smile* No!
Rowan: *shakes head* Anyway, this was rather enjoyable to read, though imagining all those sounds gave *me* a slight headache.
Sakura: So? Who cares?
Rowan: *snaps* I do! Ja ne!

GROWR! No matter what you say.. blam it on other singers for the worlf to hear, that was still good... ^_^ keep it up... and if you haven't checked. I added another chapter to "Friend or pika pika" YAY TIME! check it out na no da! very shiny!

O_O! That's so cute! Aww, Shu-chan. ^_^ Heh. You wrote the characters really well, which is a major accomplishment; it can be all too easy to write OOC! *clap clap clap* Er... I'm strange, it's late and I'm sleepy. At least, that's my excuse... ^^; Heh.

Poor Yuki-san, getting tormented by Shuichi-kun.
Poor Shuichi-kun, getting kicked around by Yuki. Ah, the romance. =P

~soulwithwings

Its a good start. Keep it up.

so its a wrap? yep, its sweet. an innocent g'night kiss from yuki. but so far that's all.

FYI: Maki Murakami(creater of Gravitation) is a girl, not a boy. : c)