That last line was adorable. The entire piece itself was pretty interesting to read. :]

OMG that is soo sweet

i think its really cool how

you portrayed his emotions and stuff

keep at it

nice one...but wasn't it a wall(stone wall)or maybe (concrete wall)?

AAW, cute! I like the ending

it was cute! but at the same time strange-

oh... i love it

Oh my! How sweet! How nice to know that Yoh'll be there for Anna! X3 great fic!

Its short simple but very good. I like your stories.)

That was great.. I'm not sure if you consider it is a poem... but I thought the poetic aspect blended well. I love the idea of the bubble.. it makes sense. It's funny how we can relate to fictional characters like this. This was a great written piece.. I enjoyed it.

Hey this one is nice Keep on writing Yoh and Anna fanfics. You know I'm amazed on how you write these stuffs!

ME LIKE! the comparison of the bubble and annas exterior is really imaginative, and cute .

i also liked how you did it in yohs POV, or so i think. O.O

-keiko