 Vampiric Phantoms 2005-03-26 . chapter 2Please continue this story really really soon! |
 Vampiric Phantoms 2005-03-26 . chapter 1I just read the first chapter and I have to say one thing, "DON'T KILL HER OFF!" OK since I got that out of the way i have another thing to add, I have a song that goes perfectly for Sands in this story. It's by NickleBack and it's called Just For. If you haven't heard I suggest you do, (you can go to windowns Media Player to listen)
Just thought I let you know adn this series is one ofthe best I have ever read! |
 RunawayPirate 2004-12-14 . chapter 2Haha, I just reviewed the other story for this one...good thing I checked out your profile, eh? It looks like you're off to a good start on this sequel, because Sands is off to get Sable PLUS he is getting his beautiful brown eyes back! (They'll be brown...right?) Well, I hope you update soon =)
PunkDPirate |
 Ellie 2004-12-11 . chapter 2 Must update! You can't just leave us hanging like this! |
 Sandsfan1 2004-08-28 . chapter 2 well...next chap! next chap is seriosly needed...NOW! |
 DragonHunter200 2004-08-24 . chapter 2YAY!! Sands is gonna see again! Always good. Great chapter. PLEASE update soon this time! DON'T MAKE ME BEG! |
 DragonHunter200 2004-08-24 . chapter 1Oh my god! I've been waiting for months for you to update this and then I realize that I never even reviewed the first chapter! Sorry!! Very nice, though! |
 Dawnie-7 2004-08-24 . chapter 2Oh goodie!He''s have sight again.That's just fantastic.Can't wait and glad to see you working on this story again. |
 Lilianna 2004-07-17 . chapter 1 Hey, you have top keep this story going...It's really good and its different...a very entertaining read.
Sorry if you do not understand my inglish. I'm still learning.
Keep writing! |
 Liraniel 2004-07-01 . chapter 1 *gasp* what happens next?!
First off, I'll just say that although I usually HATE OFCs, Sable really kicks arse. Love her. She's great.
Next I'll just say that the characterisation in this is really clever. By making Sands hate Dawes, everyone hates Dawes. By making Sands like Sable (with restraint), everyone likes Sable. Don't know if you did that deliberately or not, but you did and it works.
Lastly I'll just say, as I usually do, please update soon!
Love Liraniel.
PS: if you ever need a beta-reader, email me. |
 Dawnie-7 2004-06-07 . chapter 1Oh goodie,a sequel already.And sounds like it's going to be every bit as good as the last.Damm that Dawes,I've hated him ever since you first introduced him.Hopfully he';; get what's coming to him.
Sable didn’t reply, she had such a good comment to make, but staying quiet was much easier.
Oj,don't you just hate when you have something good to say but your mind won't let you. |
 JackFan2 2004-06-07 . chapter 1O.. Great start, my dear! Really great! I'm going to have to back up and read the first story. Sorry I'm such a late comer to this one. Rat always talked about your OUaTiM fic's and how brilliant they were. Not that I didn't belive her.. just that I can get so caught up in PotC stories.. I'm branching out, now.
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Update more when you can!
Ta! |