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| Black Aliss 2004-08-05 ch 2, | abuseGood Job, really good job, but you might want to break up the text |
| The Daimon Enyo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseFairly good story thus far. Actualy, I believe that the LEP didn't make the lenses, one of Butlers contacts did. Other than that, I can't find much else that seems to be out of place, so to speak. -Farseer_Tydraad |
| TeenTypist 2004-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. I really like it so far. I don't usually read post-EC stories but I like this one and I'm gonna kepe reading it. Awesome job! I hope you update soon. |
| Female Foaly 2004-06-07 ch 1, | abusefantastico... |