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| cuteandklutzy 2006-08-25 ch 17,  | abuseThis was so genuine and sweet. I felt like I was there in California, instead of sitting at my desk in Texas! Super job! I luff this piece so much! |
| edward'is'like'no'other 2006-07-27 ch 17, | abusenow what kind of ending was that?! u left so much out there to wonder about! u know u have to make a sequel or something to make it better. it was a wonderful story though i absolutely loved it, well, except for the ending i didnt care much for that but other than that i loved it!1 |
| Tia92 2006-07-12 ch 17, | abuseu r seriously an unbelieveable writer! this story waz amazing! n tho it ended it end so well it is a clifhanger but still sums up the story! i can't wait 2 read the sequel: Incomplete |
| BrittneyBagwell88 2005-10-22 ch 17, anon. | abuseThis story was so...heartwarming and...genuine. I know what it's like to be abused and this story pretty much followed the direction of my own life. You have talent and I hope that you continue to use it to help other people. |
| theshyone 2005-08-26 ch 17, | abusegood story, very descriptive, i liked your ending, i'm definatly hoping that you'll write a sequel!! Thanks for the awesome story. |
| Shippousfriend 2005-08-18 ch 17, anon. | abuseUgh!! You made me cry again! And Maries moving across the country, I know that's along way, I live In NC and We've driven to Calafornia! Poor Bradin! |
| Shippousfriend 2005-08-18 ch 11, anon. | abuseOh that was so sweet!! It made me cry, of course it doesn't take much to make me cry, I'm a wimp. But still, Bradin is so caring and the way they act around each other is the sweetes thing! |
| The-creative-genius 2005-07-17 ch 16, | abuseomg... please write a sequel... please please... i thoruoghly enjoyed your story... please keep up the fantastic work you are doing! |
| Summerland Chick 2005-05-07 ch 17, | abusethis was so the best story ever! plz make a sequel plz plz plz! |
| Caitlin 2005-04-30 ch 17, anon. | abusePlease write a sequel! I would love to read it and of course review it! K, well, bye! |
| cutxupxangel 2005-04-25 ch 17, | abusei loved the story, but to be honest i din't really like the ending, her leaving that's just too sad, but i still like it. ☻ |
| Jmacrocks 2005-04-24 ch 17, | abuseWow the best ever. I hope you write more and more amazing stories. i would love to read them. thanks 4 the great story! IT's awesome! |
| Caitlin 2005-04-23 ch 17, anon. | abusePlease continue this story and make a sequel! I would love it if you did, but if you don't it's okay. This was a great ending to the story and a very cute one at that! Congratulations! By the way, you are a GREAT writer! Just thought you should know. |
| Caitlin 2005-04-22 ch 17, anon. | abuseThat was great! I hope you do make a sequel, because I would love to see like Bradin go and surprise Marie with a visit in North Carolina! That would be really cute, but you're the writer so ya, anyways, great story and I hope you do make a sequel, because if you do, I will be reviewing! Bye! |
| the different person 2005-04-22 ch 17, | abuseOh darn it. I havent reviewed in a while and i dont really know if this review still matters but id still like to review anyway. (im a bit stubborn) Im so relieved that Marie finally got the sorta happy ending she deserved. Its too bad that Bradin didnt, but oh well. I hope that theres going to be a sequel in the future; this story is terrific. Kudos on a well written story! =] |