ohmygoodness, now i'm the idiot.
you said you were wondering if anyone was going to catch it, and i obviously did...i've just read so many stories where the author did stupid things out of ignorance, i immediately jumped to the same conclusion here.

i guess it was a good idea, but to anyone knowing a scrap of chemistry or biology it seems blatantly ignorant.

(my review for the other chapter is under the same name, only not logged in cause i'm lazy)

...anyway. must read more now that i've made a fool of myself for acting before looking for the explination :)

seriously, the pain;
Dihydrogen Monoxide, or DHMO

as in 2 H, 1 O
as in H2O (which would be a less idiotic shorthand as well, you would rarely, if ever, see the prefixes and elements shortened as DHMO)
as in water.

think you got your chemicals mixed up.
if your going to bluff, at least put some effort into it.

AMAZING!! XD only wish that would happen in the real story >.< I really loved this story, Best Harry/Draco Fanfic I've ever read! XD

I LOVE ITT! XD

This was a brilliant story. thanks :)

Ok, love the story, but my favorite parts of course are when Draco has thoughts about the white jacket and crayons.

~~That little white jacket didn't seem so scary now. And crayons, Draco did so like to draw.~~

Oh I just love the crayon part...

Well, i would read the rest, but dream land is calling my name. Tomorrow then!

Oh gosh this was an interesting fic too ><! Last chapter was wonderful

AW. That was beautiful. Sometimes, only the promise of such a sweet ending was the only thing that kept me from giving the story up when the boys were being idiots.

I really like the touch with the water. That was hilarious. As soon as you I realized what the i-dot medi-wizard was saying, I burst out laughing. That was awesome, especially because two different potions masters didn't recognize it.

And your take on Poppy, at least there at the end, sounds so much like me and my friends. I know good and well that after a few of them find out I've had sex, they are likely to ask me the same question. I loved that, btw, though I'm sure I won't like it so much when it happens to me.

:giggle: I had this huge loony grin while reading this last chapter. I'm such a sap XD

A little tidbit of advice though; you make a lot of mistakes between your and you're + then and than

your: possesion= this is your book
you're: verb= you're beautiful
then: time= first he kissed and then he sucked on the flesh
than: comparison= you're even more beautiful than the last time

No major critic, but it can help to make the reading experience so much nicer

Kizzels

I was a little confused by the point of this story because the crucial points were never really explained. I mean how did Harry fell in love with Draco? Or Draco with Harry for that matter. What was with the panic attacks? Why did neither of them have the balls to sort the mess out without 'The Plan'? It was a captivating story but I was dissapointed that a plot line that should have lasted a couple of chapters was stretched out for so long. I also recomend that you look through this story again for badly organised sentances and simple wording errors.

Well done.

*Eowyns Entity

THAT **!

lol @ dihydrogen monoxide

It took me a bit to figure out what it actually is.
hahaha

lmao that was a great way to end this! i really liked it

This was cute. Despite it being rather well written, it was a bit sappy for my tastes. Nevertheless, it was cute.

Thank you!

Omg! Just omg. Too much for words. Seriously, you did an absolute fabulous job with this! I love how you make the actions so much more important and meaningful than any sort of words. And when the words come, everything is just that more powerful... It was really really beautiful. I loved the way you characterised them, although it was confusing at times (I got a little lost in some of the earlier stuff and I wondered if Harry was permanently scarred or anything.. I would think they'd be able to heal them but it didn't say one way or the other). This is the first time I've read this fic and I've been in the fandom for ages, so I apologise for that. However, I'm almost glad I've saved this for so long; I haven't read any recently written fics that just blew my mind away like some have in the past (i.e. Growing Pains by Sensibly Tainted which I've read like 10 times now!). Oh oh and one other thing, I think it was it slightly incomplete in that you implied that Harry and even Draco desired to have children...it would be really awesome if you did even a short drabble on that... I'd adore an mpreg!