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| DarkPhantom101 2007-10-26 ch 6, | abuseplz update can't get enough of it |
| Kairi's-twin 2007-06-21 ch 6, | abuseWOW! this story is intense! I love it! strange how this french girl has the same name as Dracula's senior bride!I really likethis story so far... I hopor Dracula turns up soon! This story is really cool PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! ~kairi's twin~ |
| Fortune Zyne 2006-04-24 ch 6, | abuseWhen does Dracula come into the story? |
| Ron's Sweetie 2006-04-20 ch 6, | abuseGreat story wow keep going with it. Please? |
| Elwyndra 2006-04-20 ch 6, | abuseThis was wonderful! =D I'm suprised to see not many have reviewed to it, lol. This is certainly not a flame, but perhaps if you could change the summary a little, there are alot of summary's similar that show of young girls with secrets, and it tends to become a little cliched. (I know because I have a VH fic about it, lol.) Well, I hope it works and GOOD LUCK! ;D Please update soon!! =) ~Elwyndra |
| dtm666 2004-11-28 ch 3, | abuseContrary to your note, I didn't find the story to be boring. I'm actually enjoying it and looking forward to the rest of it. As a side note, I can sympathize with your struggling to get the ball rolling on this story. It does happen. Sometimes, a little time off from a fic is all you need to get an idea or two. In any case, if you decide to continue with this story, I'm looking forward to it. |
| Spikey Silly 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow...suspense. Oh this is a great start for a story. Very interesting. I love Van Helsing. Anyways cool story and I love the way you described everything, you write very well. ^^ Good job though. Very cool start. -frolics off to read other chapters- |
| Goth13 2004-06-23 ch 3, | abuseHey, so far this is a great story. Keep up the awesome writing. |
| Mystic Vixen 2004-06-22 ch 3, | abuseThat was good! If you ever come to a point where your story is boring or something like that, just throw a few sarcastic lines in there and you'll be fine. well, in my opinion you will be but this chapter wasn't boring but it was short, I'll give you that. Post more soon and keep writting! |
| elwen 2004-06-15 ch 3, anon. | abusehey, great story. when will it be done? write more. please write MORE!! this was really good. |
| Mystic Vixen 2004-06-08 ch 2, | abuseGREAT STORY! KEEP WRITTING! YOU NOW HAVE MY FULL ATTENTION |
| Dracona In Volata 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I especially like the 'my hero.' bit. I can't wait to read more. |
| Mystic Vixen 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseHey That was good! I assume you've seen the movie then. This was good. I can't wait til you put up the next chapter. I love Van Helsiong and had been waiting for someone to put a story about him up. well see you later. |