Ya, this is good. Wording ant the same but oh well. At lest you stick mostly to the manga.

Cool I hope as soon as I learn how to get started writing stories I can write a story like this!

ooooo... another good flashback

this rocks! Make more like this! In fact, every one should send this author their credit card numbers so he can withdraw the cash he deserves like... 4hd65jdf8. he needs this more than you insignificant losers ever will.

yo heero sweet story but i told you before finish the storys and they will be much better then they are now. O ya so when are we going to start our fan fic?

Hmmmm...goog good, sappy memories, tears, some blood...well it could afford to be angstier but...it was still good! I like the ending!

I love it! It must be depressing 'cause that's what I love, twistedly enough... Yeah, write more depressing stuff - trust me, the more you write the more angsty it becomes!

I liked it, and the way all the memories tied together in the end *_*