 SeedC 2005-06-02 . chapter 1Just excellent. This one engages on so many levels. Skillfully written, nice arc, great characterizations, dialogue, relationships, pace... Really well done. ... I am trying to find some suggestion to make, to give some token payment for this good read (and as the sincerest tribute to the writer); pretty hard. Ok maybe more Carter in some other story. And more Teal'c in another. Thank you for your work. |