Reviews for Illusions of Love

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Karin1 2004-06-14 ch 2,	abuseIt took me a few days to read this story, but here I am finally, telling you that I absolutely loved it. You are so talented! You have this special way with words...it's almost poetic. This fanfic is so beautifully written and the characterization is just perfect. This is exactly how I wanted Bloodlines to end. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, Marlou! ~Karin~
wp1fan 2004-06-13 ch 2,	abuseAnd where is the rest of this?! ; P I loved your pacing with this fic...no rushing into anything, which is perfect in-character for G/S. I hope(since you didn't write The End at the end) that you may consider continuing this! Great job!
niff74 2004-06-12 ch 2,	abuseI love this fic. I really do. Love the way you know them so well, but mostly the way you didn't rush them into a relationship. I expect nothing but tenderness from grissom when he finally decides to "do something about 'this'" and that kiss in the end made me weak in the knees as it should. so... when are you gonna tell us what happens next? :D
sirageeks 2004-06-12 ch 2,	abuseA wonderful ending for a wonderful story. You did a perfect job with capturing the atmosphere of season four. That won't be your last fic, right? hint
surrendersomething 2004-06-12 ch 2,	abuseThat was beautiful - it captured just about everything about the various moments. Very fitting end to Bloodlines.
Cindy aka SG1PhileShipper 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThis story is so perfect. Excellent characterization, beautifully written. Smooth, easy readable and lovely. My heart is beating really fast here. You have to write more fics, it's wonderful
And Also With You 2004-06-11 ch 2,	abuseThis is one of those stories that makes you sigh because it's written just...RIGHT. So well done and beautiful. I like the idea of a friendship forming. This line is fabulous-- "Sweet, soft and sensual, it conveyed love rather than lust, patience over longing." and says so much about the scene you created. Nicely done, beta. pats Marlou on the head hee hee.
jtbwriter 2004-06-11 ch 2,	abuseI like this-slow but steady! Gris is being a man for once-Thanks for Sara finally listening! I hope something else comes of this! Thanks!
LSI 2004-06-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm glad you decided to try your hand at writing, M. This was very well executed...well-written and interesting. I'm looking forward to more from you.
Anansay 2004-06-11 ch 2,	abusehides face in shame I can't believe I didn't review the first chapter! I so thought I had... oh dear. I know I already told you how I feel about this, but I also know how much a public review just adds to the weight of compliments. So, without further ado, I shall review! (Hey! that's a rhyme! lol! ) When I read this I was instantly struck by the "softness" of it. You took a scene and stretched it out, showing us much more about the scene and the characters than we would normally see. You handled it beautifully in a very gentle way. I believe the bug's gotcha! :)
mossley 2004-06-11 ch 2,	abuseVery beautiful. You have a true gift for writing.
Battus philenor 2004-06-11 ch 2,	abuseI just loved this story. The way you continue to portray the depth of Sara's hurt is fabulous. Sara's biggest fear is just heartwrenching. Grissom's "I'll be waiting." is my favorite line. What a great line to end his declaration of commitment with.
Butterflied777 2004-06-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it! Please update very very soon! Its so awesome and seems so show worthy already! Update soon! ;-) :-)
niff74 2004-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThink there's a pattern here? everybody saying "told you so"... ;) well, they're all correct, of course, since this is wonderfully written. As I've already told you, I love your unique descriptive style, and that little Berkeley paragraph deserves a fic of its own... right. Where was I? oh, right. You're lovely and amazing, and please don't take too long for the next fic!
KmNO4 2004-06-09 ch 1,	abuseI love it! Another PBH...Post Bloodlines Hit! lol* Keep up the great work xx

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