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enderverse
2008-05-11
ch 5,
abusepretty good story I like how his pokemon aren't becoming immediately Über powerful like most ranma/pokemon stories. it would be cool if he had at least one non fighting or normal type that got taught martial arts.
Dragon Man 180
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseI love Kasumi with a Vulpix! I'll also suggest a Dratini, I think she'd be great with 'cute' starter level pokemon who can grow up big and defend her if she needs help. Plus, I can just see her enjoying being friends with them more than battling all the time. I can't wait to see how things go with Ranma's mental issues!
Usam
2008-05-09
ch 6, anon.
abuseNice, this is one of the better ones I have read, next to Hung Nugens story. Keep this up. About the pokemon he should get next, I would say a male Raltz, not only is it a good psychic, but it also evolves into a Galade with the shiney stone, which makes it a strong fighting type for later on.
Wonderbee31
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseNice part here, and looks like Ranma has pulled himself together somewhat, and going to be curious to see what happens when they hit the next gym.
Requiem the Relentless
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseNonono, I meant turning him into a pokemon as a curse.

But still, just you saying that shows great promise.
Dumbledork
2008-05-09
ch 6,
abuseExcellent like always.
Alex Ultra
2008-03-25
ch 5,
abuseI like the story. Beyond that, I think that a Machop would be an excellent match for Ranma. It's said (by the Pokedex in one of the games) that Machop are masters of all sorts of Martial Arts, and Ranma, I think, would appreciate the training partner. And having a fighting type, especially one with as much potential as Machop, would be great for Ranma.

Good stuff, keep it up!
solo77
2008-03-23
ch 5, anon.
abusefor your suggest some pokemon thing,

TorChick due to it gaining the fighting type when it evolves, thus it can learn martial arts and this could be a plot device to help ranma out

Eevee due to its rather bizzar genetic makeup so that it can be evolved into whatever is necessary for a plot point ect

and last but not least a squirtle, no real reason i can see ranma having one other than they are good water types, and this can help for a better balanced team
Requiem the Relentless
2008-03-19
ch 1,
abuseOnly one critique: Should of had Genma turn into a Pokemon, like an Ursaring.
KaitonLocke
2008-03-19
ch 5,
abuseThis is one of the better Ranma/Pokemon fusions I've seen thus far. You have yet to butcher your english grammar or wither of the worlds you meshed. As for Pokemon that would fit with Ranma, I'd say Blaziken, Glaceon, and Lucario. I know the fightting type thing is a bit cliche, but they'd take to Ranma faster than most pokemon. Plus and ice Pokemon makes a good Charizard/Satoshi replica.
ranma girl 14
2008-03-18
ch 5,
abuseNice chapter, I wonder if Ranma/Makoto will kick Akane's ** for some reason.
Also,just throwing it out here, It would be awsome if Ranma got a Piplup... part of his family are water trainers after all.

plz plz plz update soon! ^-^
mythicalprogrammer
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseoh man I love snorlax. They sleep all day, eat a lot, and they're strong just like Ranma. LOL. Alright I'll read more before I can say anything else. Thanks for the fic!
AshK
2008-03-18
ch 5,
abuseNice Update! It's been a while! Great work with this chapter!

Sincerely,
AshK
Dragon Man 180
2008-03-18
ch 5,
abuseI hate human Genma, but Pokemon Genma seems nice and willing to help others. I would love to see Kasumi join the group, the Tendo home stinks to me. I'd suggest Ranma/Makoto getting at least one fighting type, probably a Machop she can raise to a Machamp by sparring with.
viki
2008-03-18
ch 4, anon.
abuseYou know that it's SATOSHI, not Saitoshi.
Big difference. サトシ in katakana.
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