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Reviews For: Coming Home

Kitten Kisses 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty cute. :) You only had one mistake, and that was when you put Florina instead of Fiora. (Their names get so confusing, lol.)
pseudonymous-gibberish 2005-12-28 ch 1,	abusegee, eliwood is just sounding horrendous :'D
Silvara 2005-06-03 ch 1,	abuseLovely ! Here I'm still to read, and loyal I shall remain. an eternal Fiora/Kent's fan
katelynn 2004-07-19 ch 1, anon.	abusehey good job! lol who cares if your not that good at romance i dont like romance fics that much but luckily for you it wasnt too smoochy smoochy i love you kind of stuff so good job c ya
:D 2004-06-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou are not bad at romace at all! I liked the whole AU part it was...interesting...hahaha Dart as a punk??! Hehheheh I'm supporting your sequel to this too :) -The unknown Emotion Reviewer
Cathy Barton 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseYay, a Kent/Fiora! I don't think I've seen many of these around this section, and that's a shame since it's such a cute pairing. Kent works in a lot of pairings, and this is one of my favorites, although there is one that will never be replaced as my favorite. XP I think the whole AU setting really worked for the two of them, and altogether, I thought it was a nice one-shot. Your writing style is really nice, and fluent, too. And nice grammar? That's a very welcomed change from some of the things being submitted recently. Nice job! ^^
R Amythest 2004-06-11 ch 1,	abuseAww! So sweet! ^_^ Rather well-written, and very realistic. (I need a boyfriend. I need a life... well, I have one. I just got it on discount, so it sucks.)
gentleness28 2004-06-09 ch 1,	abuseAw...sweetness! I love Fiora/Kent! They're just so...perfect for each other, you know? Too bad it's just a one-shot...wah... Want to write a sequel? ^_^ Rebecca: Yeah, write a sequel with Nino in it, and that way everyone will be happy! Me: nods I like that idea! Rebecca: ^_^ Me: ^__^ OMG! I just realized something...I'm actually agreeing and getting along with my muse! Rebecca: Huh? OMG! You're right!! Me: Ah! Stop agreeing with me!! Rebecca: Right! Oh, I mean...agh! No...I never wanted to sink THIS low... Me: Hey! There's no reason to-- Rebecca: Keep Writing, SweetMisery430! Me: Wait--
Sword of Seals 2004-06-09 ch 1,	abuseAw, I love Kent/Fiora. They are just so much alike.
TheOneAndOnlyT 2004-06-08 ch 1,	abuseCool! I'm not usually fond of AUs, but I liked this story. Your romance was great; I don't see why you lack confidence in it. Unlike a lot of romance authors, you seem to make all the dialogue believeable...and that's what makes a good romance. And I loved Sain yelling "I can't find our candy stash!" LOL...I could really see him yelling that just at that moment. Keep up the good work! I'd love to see more romances from you (I'm a romance sap :) )

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