This is really realy goo you have to update soon please!

Great start!!
Can't wait to read more!!

Really great story so far - I am looking forward to the next chapter... so, more soon?

This story has been beutifully written so far. PLEASE don't abandon it now!

OMG! This is brilliant! Going stright to my C2 of amazing stories! Great job! Please update soon, I love it! It's so real, and even though the idea has been writen many times this one is just so captivating! Is ther goign to be slash? If there isn't that's alright but if there is, even better! Hurry please with the next chapter!
WOW!
~Lisa

Love it! Love it! Love it!
This story is really good!
You have very impressive writing skills!
Please, please please UPDATE SOON!
This story rocks!

*tackles* you must up date!! please pritty please!! this is soo cool! i really want to read the next chapter, its really good!! -Ja

Exciting chapter! I liked it a lot, and was glad to see that Ralph, for the time being, has stopped his death! Update soon!

Ooh, who would have thought LotF could have such cool fanfiction? Keep it up!
Bejipan

Nice fic. I thought it was rather nicely done, your characterisation was quite good. Please write more.
^_~
DreamWeaver

Ouch, that´s so cruel. I loved it! I read the new version and all, and really, really liked it! The fight scenes are incredible, breath taking (is it the correct word...?) I´m waiting to the update ^^

M, good story so far! Will there be slash? (I'm probably not the first to ask this...) If there isn't that's great, but if there is... even better! Keep working on this, eh?

this was cool. at first i was wondering where you weregoing with all that tourte but it came out nice and showed a diferent veiw on Jack

Gah, that's so sad! Please update soon!

Roger: Aw, no killing for me
SariaSubi: But a hug from me!

Anyway, good job on the story. Keep it goin'